From: Cameron Kaiser <spectre@floodgap.com>
Message-Id: <200512231600.IAA15290@floodgap.com>
Subject: [gopher] Re: Veronica and U of NV
In-Reply-To: <20051223145045.GA25144@SDF.LONESTAR.ORG> from Benn Newman at
 "Dec 23, 5 08:50:45 am"
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Date: Fri, 23 Dec 2005 08:00:48 -0800 (PST)
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> Last draft to the University of Nevada System about releasing the source
> for Veronica for public comment:

Just a couple of grammar suggestions to make it look a little more
professional:

"are tuning them up currently[,] Jughead in its original [state] and a
newly made V2 which emulates Veronica[.] Archie is also being"

"is a goal of many of the members in our community[;] another goal is to"

"[Sincerely,]"

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